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kitty in dreamland (down the rabbit hole)

all of this
is this all
there is

in us
in here

in
finity
being
trapped
caught

yes
i have
red
hands

in
secure

within
without

out
side
looking
in

where am i
where
is here
and there
is no way
to tell
which way
you went

my guide
keeps
distancing
dis
appearing
behind realities

unaware
yet
so
aware
of what this
may
mean

dreams
tell us everything
without ever
saying
anything

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On Monday November 29th, 2004, Drea (929) writes:

*claps* Stunnging.

On Monday November 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

You're beautiful,Kitty.

On Monday November 29th, 2004, Drea (929) writes:

I second that.

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

I like how the words are fractured, and seem to speak out in there own way, and the dream theme holds it together nicely...~Mikey

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

i like the title it suits the poem very well and the end tied everything together wll done~ss

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:

Bravo. -Glass

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

wonderfully written with some really inspired parts and flow and the last verse i so loved

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