DarkPoetry -|- Bast -|- ...slowly...fading...

...slowly...fading...

sometimes...
when the sun is low
and the heart
follows suit

i sit alone
cold
and wonder
if i am just
a flicker
before
the
fall

i feel myself
fading
soft and slow

like a photograph
i wither
and grow
brittle
grey

slowly
i see myself

fading

...away...

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on ...slowly...fading...

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, toy soldier (39) writes:

you my dear, are an artist in every way ...

On Friday October 28th, 2005, Gold Dust Woman (167) writes:

nice write i like the part about fading away

On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:

O.O ::Is speechless::

On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, Jadedwings (356) writes:

W. O. W. THIS MAY BE THE REALEST WORK OF ART I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE TO SEE.....

On Monday December 20th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:

this is so wonderful.. the slow ponderous almost disbelieving flow of your words accompanies the image entirely... all around beautiful

On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (83) writes:

i really like this. very powerful

On Saturday June 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

beautifuL! you have a way with art and words that i envy. you have a distant sound... -Miko-

On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:

Simple and beautiful, just the way I like it. I've seen you around for a long time, but have not yet read yoour work... perhaps I shall have to.

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

the visual is a great effect...perfect illustration for powerful words. Fox

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

You are still a sexy wench!

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, sic maggot (1) writes:

i can pertain to this, beautiful just beautiful, i love it

On Sunday March 14th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

Hopefully your only fading away in thought and not reality here, this piece is great, good job ~Emptyness~

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Exodus (211) writes:

oooo pretty!......very, very nice....i love it...

On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

This is awesome, not that you fading away is though...Morb

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:

beautiful pics. again, this comes across very strong and hits to the spot.

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

Great piece, I liked the way you lined the words up along each side and then inbetween the slides making it look like a strip of old film at first glance. You have the artistic eye.

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Despairing Eyes (9) writes:

nice pic and great write....>Despair<

On Friday March 5th, 2004, hopeless (62) writes:

wow...... this is excellent work... and the picture is amazingly cool..... ~hopeless

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Ravenblade (274) writes:

This piece leaves me speachless...very touching, keep up the awesome work

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:

the words like the photograph fade fade fade to grey. ...

On Friday March 5th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:

such fabulously effective multimedia emotional poignancy... beautiful work. purr

On Friday March 5th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:

This is so...melancholy. I actually can hear these words with music. A slow drum beat with a low guitar...all very slow...and very depressing...it's amazing the emotions you tear from me.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

I really am in awae of the way you used the pic to get your point across....excellent work....

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:

finally the picture's there! w00t.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

i wish i could see the pic. but what was written was pretty cool.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

and now that i have seen the whole picture. this is very personal. i feel like i know something about you through this. and i hope all will become well.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

*picks heart up off the floor*... +T.P.U+

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:

heh... and the picture isn't even there yet. i must be talented.

On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

i like reading this from bottom to top best, the end result being perfection

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/87/32545 on Saturday October 11th, 2008 01:18 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)