Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"The memory of rooms" by Kaja

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


“Recall your life for me.”
“Recall my life?”
“No, recall a moment. What is your life to you?”
“My life is my house.”
“What do you mean?”
“It is evenings of cooking and dishes. It is laughing and watching television with loved ones. It is the mundane routine of day to day. It is the tears I shed in the shower. It is the pleasure and peace I have found beneath my sheets. And there is nothing to see but walls, for no-one will ever remember these things but for me and the memory of the rooms.”

“… I see but a kitchen.”
“I feel the moment in which my hand bled to yonder knife. I hear my children asking for food and drink.”

“I see only a sitting room.”
“I hear the laughter of celebration, of birthdays and Christmas’s past.”

“I see a table upon which to dine.”
“I recall meals shared and see that mark? Yes, I dropped a candle there.”

“I see a bedroom, a place of rest.”
“No much more than that, This is where my heart was stolen… this is where my tears live.”



Just something I was playing around with. Will probably go back over that a few times before I am happy with it.



Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Tuesday July 22nd, 2008, Ainsof (1865) writes:
I like the concept... the dialogue we build with our dwellings... what becomes a part of what we see, what we hear when we're alone... like that house in DH Lawrence... our abodes... our homes... would not be our dwellings if they did not soak up so much of what we live, if they were not participating in our days... very nice...


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2008, Ainsof (1865) writes:
I wonder if there is a way to make the one who speaks first more associated with someone/thing... I also like the line with tears in the shower... I wonder if the bedroom reply could be more cryptically expressed.... just thoughts, murmurs in the dark.


On Monday July 21st, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (461) writes:
its lovely.



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/8675/111793 on Thursday December 04th, 2008 03:13 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)