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Just tell me why

Why must you yell at me
why must you speak
why am i so pathetic
why am i so weak?

why do they fight
why do they scream
why do walls crumble
why do they lean

why are we born
why do we die
why is it so hard
staying alive

why do you smile
when i lose control
why do you torture
this tormented soul

why do you love me
why do you care
why did you leave me
this isn't fair

why did you go
to a better place
you left me with nothing
but tears on my face

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On Thursday October 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (123) writes:

that was great

On Sunday February 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (22) writes:

i wish i could put as much meaning into word with so few of them like you do, your poems are just plain cool, keep it up!->

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

great write. I can relate in a way. :) ~Unlucky

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, BleedSilver (372) writes:

Very flowing, like water over a waterfall. Stick around, you are great!

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, A Broken Soul (102) writes:

excellent write! i ask the same questions... stick around dp, i like your style! ^Autumn^

On Monday February 7th, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:

wow, great write write. this was so emotional, and it flows so well. ....................-samone

On Monday February 7th, 2005, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Nice write, It flows well. -fairy

On Monday February 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:

wow... i'm glad that you commented otherwise i might not have been able to comment on this. its great! though it has a simple rhyming scheme, it works well...

On Monday February 7th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:

it flows so beautifully. awesome write

On Monday February 7th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

*behind*not nehind.;)

On Monday February 7th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

excellent flow. and wonderful wording...such powerful questions...all versed so well here. great write,and great idea nehind this. it provokes serious emotion.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:

Great flow .Well written

On Monday February 7th, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (61) writes:

yeah. . thanks crimson.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

heart wrenching write.....your almost too good for this site! hehe ~AoD

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