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RoArKe'S ReGrEt

As I sit here and slit my wrists
My veins get tight as I form a fist
It aches so bad as I move it back and forth
And they said, "this is all your life is worth"

My whole life flashes before my eyes
I see all of the truth, and all of the lies
Then I see my blood drip to the floor
I then became startled by the knock at the door

The door bursts open, my sister comes in
She yells, "Dont be like your father, suicide's a sin"
I looked her in the eyes and asked, "is this my fate?"
I fell to my knees and screamed, "you're too late"

She held my hand and let out a prayer
"why didnt you stop him god, this isn't fair"
I wonder why I picked up that knife
Dont be like me, I screwed up my life

Where were you god when I chose the wrong path
You're supposed to guide me, but you let me crash
Judgment day is coming, what do I say
please send me back god, I made a mistake. . .

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On Wednesday November 9th, 2005, to love a psycho (25) writes:

I'm not lettign Crimson take all credit for loving you cause i do to, just not in the same way that i used to, but it's all the same.

On Saturday June 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Very powerful. I felt as though I was in the room with the with them.

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

the first and last stanzas are amazing.

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

if you EVER EVER do this again..i will have someone kick your frickin ass!! you know how much we love you, ya freak! so stick around a while.

On Saturday March 19th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

Great poem. You captured the emotion very well. Definately on my faves.~Unlucky

On Monday February 14th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

i third lordshadow most poems like this seem like a cry for attention this one had a messege in it that was very well exspresed ~~GOTHIC~~

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Dr Benway (45) writes:

Ya, I second Lordshaow, most Cutting/suicide stuff makes me gag or laugh, but I really liked this one. I hope to read more from you.

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

arent you glad I made you read this? hehe

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (859) writes:

I'm with lordshadow, I commend you on this work:) welcome to dp

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, lordshadow (215) writes:

Usually, I absolutely despise cutting poems... but I said usually. I actually enjoyed this very very much. I thought it came right from the heart and wasn't an attempt at attention like most. Very nicely done... excellent.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, Dr Benway (45) writes:

I don't think a poem has ever made it grit my teeth before, I can really feel this, thank you.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, Lydia Jade (788) writes:

Yes, very powerful, brings back some bad memories, nice to read your works for the first time, i plan to visit again.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (332) writes:

powerful shit. it flows so smoothly and i love your writing style. nice

On Monday February 7th, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (61) writes:

thanks crimson. this is my first 'meaningful' poem.

On Sunday February 6th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

I think I read this one in your notebook already...its great!! i love you man! hehe ~AoD

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