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The phrase,
To “pull wool over one’s eyes”
I apply to the loss of sunny days
(only for those searching for a pay-raise)

But of those who don’t reside in the city’s gray haze?
Those who live in crystal-blue skies,
I give them praise
…For finding new ways to stay within the maze

Do you find it a surprise?
For I’ve seen all your displays
And though I don’t enjoy goodbyes
I am no longer willing to restrict my heartbeat for this guise

So continue to call yourself wise
(I’m only slightly hypocritical)
And for now I will try not to sensationalize
The simple fact that is right before your eyes

For while you stay apolitical
I know exactly why you do not bring this lie to its demise
Perhaps in days to come they’ll say I’m hypercritical
Instead of just analytical

But to me there is only one prize
For yourselves to someday become more critical
And let go of all the intoxicating lies




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On Sunday January 28th, 2007, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I liked how you used hypocritical and then later hypercritical. Really good write and good rhyme scheme. The hypercritical / analytical part is by far my favorite


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:
"Do you find it a surprise? For I've seen all your displays/And though I don't enjoy goodbyes..." Wow...I love the rhyme scheme, and the message here...*sighs* Excellent piece! ~*Beth*~


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, LOKI (265) writes:
yea.I try to help when I can.But seriously it was a good write.I will have to look at your profile and read a few more


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, LOKI (265) writes:
I like this.You ended it well.Let go of all the intoxicating lies.It has a truth to it.Thats always good


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, your_only_love (165) writes:
heh trying to help me fight that frustration over constructive criticism, I wonder? lol



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