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"Psionic Fires" by your_only_love

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there were rainbows walking across my eyes,
there were stars falling from the tides...
wonderlands crossing through my heart
making my soul start
there were crystalline springs,
there were fountains of psionic dreams
mythological gods of native lands
drifting through this hour glass like a multitude of dream-sands
there were intwined lovers,
there were mothers & brothers...
soul-sisters stronger then the ocean
a single heart made of motion
there were prisms of desires
there were souls willful enough to start fires
in each one of our hearts
that bring us each morning to make more surreal arts

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I'm not quite satisfied with the rhythm of the ending here, so feel free to offer suggestion- I'd really appreciate it.



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On Saturday March 1st, 2008, carlosjackal (1650) writes:
How about.."in each our hearts/that bring us the morning/so we may burn the past"..I loved the rest, very vivid and lush ith imagination. Excellent stuff =) -Carl


On Friday July 14th, 2006, slow.burn.star (96) writes:
Maybe leave the last line off-beat from the piece by not rhyming it at all...? very visual word flow. -the burned one-


On Thursday July 13th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2425) writes:
yeah it falls it a bit flat. I like how it starts and the first line is suptuous, truly. i don't know what to suggest, except for re-draft??


On Thursday July 13th, 2006, An Expired Member (26) writes:
Enchanting write. It seemed to be a tale in my head. I think it's perfect. Their your thoughts, don't change them.



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