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     An image of the ocean, panoramic. We stand atop the cliff where the sharp winds of the north roll over us with all the speed of their unimpeded journey over the glassy surface of eternity. Leaves clamber over each other, tumbling across the yellowing grass, fleeing the bite of the cold. We stand, robed in little more than linen of the night sky.
     We stand.
I do not reach to you.
     As the senses are overwhelmed with the briny smell of the ocean, the roar of waves rushing over the jagged obsidian of memory, we lean into the wind. The expanse of the shimmering past ripples into the distance, the unfriendly winter sun unable to penetrate the surface. It calls us forth, and the wail of the winds becomes a call. Which of us calls forth to pass over?
    I see you move forward, but I cannot reach for you. I see you prepare for flight, watch in horror as the cold wraps its arms around you, its razor-wire pulling your wings tight about you. I see your oblivion as the past calls, as a power more overwhelming than humanity calls, and you do not care that the cold is about to strangle you. You do not notice that you no longer have what you once had. With you poised before the memory of what was lost, before the fall into the grips of darkness, I can do no more than shift.
    Caught between humanity and something beyond any such boundaries of reality, I burst into flight. From within, a star burns, and I harness this energy like only I can. I am made of fire and water; I take the cold into me and burn, wrapping coils of warmth around you as you leap. As I burn inside, you fly. Your wings are loosed and the sky is yours.
I am content to know I have given you the choice. You are free for as long as you choose to be.



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On Sunday January 27th, 2008, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I have to say, i pulled this up and started not to read it because it was lengthier than I like to read but once i started it drew me in and i read it captivated. I think you're writting has definately grown since I was last on here. You dod have a way of keeping the reader captivated. I think you should consider writting short stories or novels


On Sunday January 27th, 2008, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I read somewhere that the novel replaced the poem as the cultural dominant in the 20th century and in the 21st century it will be the screenplay. I think you could easily write litereary fiction, you're choice of words is colorful and creates images in the readers head that is all important in fiction.


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
gorgeous. I can't do that, Like Bella, I sound emo too. Damn the luck! good write....do more!


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
ambiguous but still reletive (how did you do that?) to the concept of the write.... when i try to do this, it screams emo, but when you do it, its profound... good job


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, your_only_love (164) writes:
*chuckles* thanks? Much of the imagery here are things only mi amor would probably understand, but I'm considering writing a bit more, as elaboration.



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