DarkPoetry -|- Cutting_for_Freedom -|- I see me

I see me

I see a girl
I see the marks on her arms
The marks she tries so desperatly to hide

I see the sadness in her heart
And the pain-filled tears as they run down her cheek

I see the bruises that are no longer there
The scars that have faded with time

I see the emotions she covers up with a smile
That smile
Her mask

I see past it all
I see the girl she tries to hide

The girl with broken dreams
Bad memories
Hate
Fear
Guilt
Depression

I see her eyes pleading silently for help
I see all of this and more
The girl I see...

...Is my reflection looking back at me...

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On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Starrburry Gayzur (71) writes:

Totally unexpected ending. I love the whole thing.

On Thursday September 1st, 2005, abattoir (143) writes:

twisted... to be the one who can look at the one who is already been one fucked up girl.I am.nice piece.

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:

beautifully painfull love the emotion this brings forth wonderful write

On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, DarkSoul (24) writes:

We all have our times. Times to grieve. Times to look ahead. Times to forge new beginnings. This is apparently your time to shine. Great write. DP mail me ~DarkSoul

On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

nicely done...i've been there before so good luck to ya!

On Monday January 24th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:

Obvious emotion...very reflective write...nicely done.

On Monday January 24th, 2005, Sex Slave (98) writes:

wow very good-Danielle

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