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Oh Daddy, How could you?

I stand alone
wrapped in desperate inching time
so unlike human heartbeat
fast and stiff
he will touch me under secrets
find me freezing in blood red blankets
trembling
laying as sleep.

"Catch my soul", I yell
a stranger passing below
stained dull glass
of window
pray you may keep it safe
oh kitty,
you are so fragile.

Public perfect of a man
touching kitty in the night
claim to teaching in the dark
justify
unworthiness would take an innocence
crimson pure with words.

Hold my breath
wish to die
daddy daddy
go away.

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On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Mab (1037) writes:

who will save us from our protectors?

On Monday October 31st, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:

Excellent write on such a seriously sad subject.

On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:

Sad but I like it.It's very deep and dark

On Monday August 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (38) writes:

sad but I like it. Keep up the good work

On Sunday May 1st, 2005, NumbInside (37) writes:

beautiful

On Friday April 8th, 2005, darkleprechaun (69) writes:

*tears* such a thief should be put to death... well written all the same. dave

On Saturday March 5th, 2005, -Oz- (173) writes:

the way you describe things is just so amazing...it's like watching an film...-Oz

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

wow..this is simply awesome!

On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (51) writes:

Wow.. I don't even know how to explain how amazing this is. You have such talent. - Holly

On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, BleedSilver (371) writes:

Welcome to DP. This is an amazing write...Just amazing.

On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:

man this is a good right were doo you find the inspiration

On Monday February 14th, 2005, Munkey (88) writes:

Oh well...shit thats deep. -Munkey-

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Zara Synn (76) writes:

Wow...it's hard for me to comment on peices like these...I'm always wanting to get all personal...Just know that I enjoyed, and felt, your writing.

On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

very dark indeed, this is something the site needs. Welcome to the DP society, lol.

On Thursday January 27th, 2005, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

this is beautiful. "catch my soul" wow.~ss

On Thursday January 27th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:

powerful and gutwrenching indeed. i dont know what else to say...im caught in the speechless spider web again...

On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

very powerful and full of emotion, extremely sad, great write ~Emptyness~

On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, purr_verse (1438) writes:

yay, you've enabled comments on this one! I read this before but couldn't comment. Extremely powerful write, gutwrenching and so effective. Great piece, brutally so.

On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

this is a dark ass poem

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