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Wonderful

She sits in the corner of the room
And eases her surroundings
Far removed from her sight I watch her
Her moves and gestures are testament to who she is
I sit and watch and she has no clue
She does not know what is in my head
And how odd that she would never know
But still I sit and slowly trace her every move
I thought it would be easy, I thought I was through
but I see that this thing I felt and feel now will not leave
When deep down in the dark I know that I cannot ever forget
I guess I should have known that someone like her would have an impact
All the people I am cannot forget the thing she is
Wonderful.

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On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

Awesome write. Im in awe ~*~Tart~*~

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

That was really buetiful. I think I get the meaning and if I'm right its happen to me before.

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:

I think free style allows more freedom to express more intimate and detailed thought and in a world where something wonderful cannot be confined to a structure what else would do it justice? ~Is a Wonderful feeling you have described here~Silver

On Sunday October 5th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (621) writes:

A quiet respite into the memories of what was and the feelings that have changed for the old reflections. Wonderful is wonderful and that can't be changed or preserved only idolized. This is "wonderful"...nicely done.~JMDW~

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (23) writes:

well for a first time free style...it was "wonderful" . i like very much

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

And I loved it...bravo! ~Velvet~

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

The First And ONLY Time I Write FreeStyle.

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