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Saviour

Looking toward the vast expanse of space
Looking towards something else in another place
Waiting for all things to come to light
Waiting for a glimmer of hope to sight

Hoping that all anticipations were not entirely dumb
Hoping that the saviour would eventually come
Praying for the time that was promised to arise
Praying for something not really a surprise

Hearing that truly we should not falter or stray
Hearing that our salvation was not so far away
Seeing our dreams finally have come to be
Seeing the saviour and knowing that truly we are free.

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On Friday August 12th, 2005, InsipidTouch (42) writes:

I love it.. it's awesome.

On Sunday December 5th, 2004, island warrior (303) writes:

Very smooth style.

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Sex Slave (100) writes:

Thanx for your comment on my poem i just love yours

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (137) writes:

I like your style...Your thought process...This poem...

On Sunday May 23rd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

This gave me goosebumps, and a warm feeling of anticipation. Such power and grace amazing work. ~L

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:

hell yeah ! deep imotions stering here great work man* you will be among my favriots*669*

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

Merry Christ-Vice-mas! Happy New Year! The Coming of the Second is upon us... and within us... each of us! 1LOVE 1PEOPLE 1PEACE

On Sunday October 5th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

This had a very interesting texture. A glimpse of the turmoil and anticipation that comes along when placing such weight on a deity. I likes. ~JMDW~

On Sunday September 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:

the highest higher power is what we hold deep inside. love the piece

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

great piece...the question remains

On Thursday August 21st, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

I'd have to say, that praying, and hoping are the same thing...-Kefka

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

Nice piece...very sweet!

On Monday July 7th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

BRAVO! excellent piece.

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Nadir (630) writes:

Indeed! I am your humble admire.

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