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Our Love

My love for you is milk.
Pity, then, that you're lactose intolerant.
Your love for me is a sweater.
Damn, it's a sunny day.
My love for you is a market place.
But you're agoraphobic.
Your love for me is ice.
But, baby, I'm a pyromaniac.

Our Love Is Great.
But It'll Never Work.
Maybe.

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On Monday May 26th, 2008, Ms Mooncake (567) writes:

this is so great. oh i know it to well, i love it. ^_^

On Thursday August 31st, 2006, sixsixnine (567) writes:

fuck yeah! it's genius!

On Thursday July 13th, 2006, evolve (2293) writes:

Haha. Don't they say opposites attract? I guess you'll find out. So very well done. Charming, even.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, TheSi|entEnigma (2) writes:

How beautifully alternative. =)

On Monday November 7th, 2005, urbanhumility (1366) writes:

love to hate? hate to love? well done Greek......................urban

On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Hehehe. She still teasing then? Anyhoo, i loved the poem; full of Gumpisms, those concise, simple statements that convey what most words cannot. Good to see one from you again.

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, AniDayz (1268) writes:

damn this is so great...shit...im all smiling at this,the raw intelligence...beaming fucking piece of art...

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1804) writes:

Your the man Greek ... I love your touch of perfection.

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, An Expired Member (14) writes:

yeah i know how this feels, like ur complete opposites but who knows..."maybe"...great write!

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, happilydepressed (214) writes:

great write, doesn't seem like it would work out

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