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Featureless Landscapes : Prologue

Lies
Speaking a silent lip’s quiver
Iterates simple defiance
To make hearts shiver

Injustice
For all internally to see
Enforcing foul thought
To taint sweet memory

Arrogance
Starting to take strong hold
Guide awkward feet
As assurances are told

Disharmony
Singing a discordant yawn
Slipping silently away
Leading to arctic dawn

Featureless
Beginnings to something old
Tearing down walls
Protecting landscapes so cold

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On Friday October 29th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

I just . . I love the way you write. So unusual and remarkable in it's profound uniqueness and mind-blowing vividity. ~ Rose.

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

wow, i really liked this!

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

eloquent and beautifuly articulate........always a pleasure to read your work sleek................urban

On Saturday May 29th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

Very nice! I like the sections about Disharmony and Featureless the best - "protecting landscapes so cold", is a great way to end this piece. Ciao, T/S

On Sunday May 23rd, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

vivid explanations at each point. flow was smooth and perfect. a nicely written piece. :)

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

oh...i wonder why i have never read you before...I like this very much, especially "Enforcing foul thought To taint sweet memory". I must read more...

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:

i couldn't help but sing it while i read this very mooving * you're very talented man! *669*

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

wow...afte ryour long leav eyou have certainly redeemed yourself. this is awesome. " Lies Speaking a silent lip’s quiver Iterates simple defiance To make hearts shiver" i have fallen for that line. *sighs* well done greek...

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Yes, my friend… This is what I like to see. Clear, eloquent and purposeful. I want the rest.

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

we missed you man.. *bows in the deep dust of dp* I love it my friend, as allways..

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

I love the format and rhyming this poem has...each stanza builds up to something more...If this a prologue, then I can't wait to see the rest.~Mikey

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

superb poem, every stanza, the last being my fave.cleverly rhymed ill certainly be looking forward to each new work from you

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