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Lonely blue stars surround this night
Absorbing the silver eyed sight
Created by wandering minds
This night

Alone for all to see in the dark this night
Hounded by past mistakes shining bright
And simplicity fades
This night

Reason runs through my fingers this night
Deliberately false sounds cause fright
Sending hot chills
This night

Hours crawl feverishly through this night
Huge allegations close in tight

[And all I can wonder]

Will I survive
This night



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On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, Bast (896) writes:
I feel the calm terror that coats this piece with a sheet of ice- still and frightening.


On Monday May 9th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
Great write ~*~tarT~*~


On Sunday July 25th, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:
brilliant! feeling it so much******669******


On Thursday June 24th, 2004, blackdarkness (311) writes:
great words...well done


On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
a insightful moment within this night your speaking of......to grasp and gather words......in time of need, you have spoken well here........urban


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, asailorsangel (39) writes:
The anxiety caused by the thought of loneliness can make the paranoid voices in our mind run rampid - now you scared me...ASA~


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:
oh wow, the piece is great.~~~Grave


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
that was really cool. i liked it alot! mwah!


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
It is indeed a treasure. Well done. *Steals a gem and runs*.


On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, suicideseason (2144) writes:
this is a great poem."Deliberately false sounds cause fright" perfectly represents how the mind plays tricks on you...when you're alone in the dark.very nice!~season


On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, Methos (154) writes:
Very nice write. I relate to this poem. very good. -Methos



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