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Case And Point

In a pure room whitest of them all
Soul washing hands ready for a fall
Grace and beauty bid farewell
And all things no longer do dwell

Emptiness fulfilling every desire
And fading grim black will expire
All things surely and gradually grow
Warning signs begin their ominous glow

Set aside feeble longing of the unattainable
Measured goals must remain sustainable
Harsh radiance escapes impenetrable walls
And heat induced insomnia crawls

Stars are being searched for belief
As the room absorbs every grief
Greatness attends the supreme conscription
And the feeling is beyond all description

Sit and observe your place
And revel in the grace
Let it fall upon your face

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On Sunday July 25th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:

again brilliantly a wicked piece! awesome work! *669*

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:

This is the first I've read of yours and I enjoyed it very much. I really like you name. That's what caught my eye *Greek Philosopher* =-MO-=

On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, asailorsangel (39) writes:

As stated before many ways in which the mind can translate, I see it as standing at the doorway of change. ASA~

On Saturday November 22nd, 2003, wilted (303) writes:

This is one of those poems that i just can't find the words to say what i think about it. It's nice. heh. -kirstyn

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

Your a damn good poet Greek.. damn good..

On Sunday October 5th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

I just love the rhyme and rhythm of this ... I will have to read it over and over so as to hope it sinks in . . excellent write.

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, Nadir (619) writes:

ok cant comment I am going to dp mail you on this one... ¦Ñªê

On Monday September 29th, 2003, Loneal (118) writes:

... I love how your words are very reader-friendly, open to interpretation ... I took Delphoid-Q's suggestion and re-read your work ... and a different meaning came to my mind each time ... great work! ~L

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

I think the profoundness of this piece will escape most who read it simply because the meaning is so deep. If anyone reads this comment my advice is to reread this piece a few more times. I guarantee you’ll find something new every time. Case and point!

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

flows...nice write

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Strabo (47) writes:

interesting...I like the line "And heat induced insomnia crawls"

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:

mm...I like your use of rhyme...never ceases to captivate and amuse me...very nice

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:

You were afraid to post this? it's wonderful, very profound. Great work.

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

i love this, and im really into the ryhmingthing beacuse it seems to me that ryhming may be a litle harderto do then free form beacuse you gotta say what you feel but make the words ryhme! but that just might be me! ~Blood~

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