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Revolution

Take the passion
And distil it pure
And give it to those
As a cure

Compel the weak
To cause a riot
Against hostility
Never be quite

Whatever you do
Cleanse all the doubt
In all the world
Last the final bout

Join the cause
Present the solution
Cause a problem
Join the revolution.

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On Sunday July 25th, 2004, sixsixnine (568) writes:

fuck yeah! short but seriously kickn some fucking ass! damn uumm good! *669*

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

poignant... powerfully simple... i feel the need to revolt!

On Sunday October 5th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

Nice write...actually made me laugh a little+Fallen One+

On Thursday September 18th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

Ohh yes. I have for a long time dwelled in this(Went in deep). The ironi of it is that this poem sums it up. No matter what we want of it. This desribes it. It is simply a game. Even if we try to control it and keep it, real. It will end up in this poem.

On Thursday September 18th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

Join The Revolution!(Not you greek hehe) Tiger

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

awesome write. i can't wait for more to come like this, i loved it plain and simple, good work *~*aNDReW*~*

On Monday September 8th, 2003, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

well done sleek, it flows without flaw, its message divine.........urban

On Sunday September 7th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

*Sings a heroic song whilst waving the Greek flag.* I'm with you all the way Chris: let's go to Zim and revolt against Mugabe ;)

On Saturday September 6th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

HELL YES... you tell em Greek.. damn nice write.. Im with ya.. Peter

On Friday September 5th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

i enjoyed this. :) revolution tastes sweet on the tongues of many... but often learning it isn't all fun and safety pins scares them off. it can be pain and bitterness as well. but adversity is the reason we revolt in the first place. nice write.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

Even if you can't "Present the solution" you can always be a part of the solution, as opposed to part of the problem. Great write. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, trowasrevolution (51) writes:

*smiles and stands up raising arm* Yes a revolution that spurs the spirit to stand up and take arms! Yes rebel! Yes fight the good fight for a revolution is always a thing of beauty. -trowa

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:

Pretty cool piece.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Yes, I liked, quietly provoking, striking deep. ~ mw

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Kittichoo (44) writes:

*Grins*

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

I like this and many of your other works. Yep, its true...

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

you deffinetly goinon my fav list when i get upgraded! ~Blood~

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