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Little Black Bordered Things

Little things
Undistinguished from the sky
Wafting around without a care why

Little black things
Going unnoticed as they try
Frivolously passing by

Little black bordered things
Searching seeking something
Notice nothing

Little black bordered things
My minds thoughts

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On Friday September 24th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

very good write, "undistinguished from the sky, wafting around without a care why" , really liked this .. simplicity with meaning..

On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

a unique way to place a trace on your thoughts. a cat and mouse of instincts, parrallel and as complicated as the powers to push them aside. im liking it. what i got form it anyway:P

On Sunday September 7th, 2003, Bluegirl (247) writes:

I really liked this one :)

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:

Nice and unusual piece - enjoyed this one very much! Ciao, T/S

On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Nadir (619) writes:

As a reader of this you get a connection to the poet, by sitting in the exact same situation with the same feel of little things Wafting around without a care why.. very good

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:

seeing as your so poetically talented n all, i didn't really get much of it, but the whole idea i'm guessing was good lol, very nice..

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

very cool greek. i felt like i was straining to see something floating by on the breeze. well done

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

i agree with bwb here i kept trying to see the little black things! ~Blood~

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