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Sorry for not posting anything in so long, we had a really bad fire in the appartment building I moved into, so I was kinda homeless, and without a computer for awhile.

Anyway, this is something I wrote while hitchhiking, in the back seat with a driver that didn't speak English, all he did was offer me a paper and pencil. Sorry if the Grammer is off, I am tired and couldn't be arsed to fix it.
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You asked me to build your alter, your shrine in broken times.
For you I became an alter. Your guide with steady eyes.
And yet I never told you, This shrine was build for two

I remember the first time you prayed before me, demanding of forgiveness, hopefull for your soul.
I was eager to kiss your worried lips,
washing you of all your fears.
You touched my face and thanked me.

All I ever wanted, was to be your salvation.

I remember the second time you prayed before me, asking for compassion, grasping your last hope.
With firm hands I assured you, wiping his sweat from your chest,
restoring you to innocence.
You fell asleep in my arms.

All I ever wanted, was to be your salvation.

I remember the third time you prayed before me, crying out for closure, desperate for a new beginning.
I wispered in your ear that I would always protect you.
I cleaned their blood from your shirt,
to help you find your pride.
You spoke of us and futures bright.

All ever wanted was to be your salvation.



Yes my dear, I was quite happy, so content to be your light.
I would of given always, just to keep you strong and safe.

Then, in my time of weakness, within a fall from grace.
I returned to find the alter cold, to find our faith had died.



I remember the first time I prayed to you, pleading for your passion, so needing of your trust.
You handed me a letter, in it words of your goodbye. You striped the alter of it's Gold, and left it in the trash.

I see now, you never wanted the salvation that you held.


I guess I should of told you, this shrine was build for two
All I ever wanted, was for our prayers to see us through...



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On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (690) writes:
*sigh* This is very sad... But very well written I think. ~V.


On Monday October 17th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:
dear god...im crying. words cant do this justice. It's absoloutly beautiful. jesus christ...im stunned. -kitty


On Friday September 30th, 2005, Philla (137) writes:
This is so heartbreakingly wonderful. This made me want to cry the most lovely words and leave them here for you... -*Philla*-


On Thursday September 29th, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
the dedication and terrible sense of loss in this overcomes me. your words hit so powerfully, i was completely lost in this even after i finished reading it. ....-samone


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:
this reads different than your other pieces...though just as captivating, just in a different way. intensely heartshattering and beautifully composed...it speaks in volumes like no other..i had vivid images running through my mind reading this.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Six-Out (1798) writes:
Me and you. We see things the same, just set the letters in different orders to say what we mean. Man...this, this is like any of your other works. I feel it a little too much, and I'm left wishing that I didn't. That I could pretend I'm only reading and


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Six-Out (1798) writes:
*not feeling. If there's anyone that understands me better, or that I understand better, show them to me. I think that we were spawned from the same cell, man.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:
Strong words to break my already fragile heart. But simply to see your name in the poetry list brings a smile to my face. We've missed you sweetie!!! xoxo


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Jerrica (120) writes:
i am beyond astounded. this is really good, couldnt stray my eyes away from this. i will be reading much more of your stuff in the futer. *J*


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (263) writes:
Aha! You posted.. Eee. That makes my whole month. I pictured you reading this, not a loud, but in your head. It was heartfelt and tragic..


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (263) writes:
You always tug and pluck at my heart chords. You're the emotional voice I wish I had. I'm so glad you're safe and pray that you are well.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (263) writes:
I read this at least 6 times before I decided to comment.. Weighing heavy on my chest, your regret. gods, I've missed you something awful. The last two lines are beyond beautiful. I miss you. Thank you.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Err0r (564) writes:
One could only wish to have half the talent you just shared in such an exquisite poem.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:
Absolutely heartbreaking, you are gold!


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Dr Benway (51) writes:
ya, everything I do is rough. I am not one of those people that thinks it's wrong to edit a poem, but if I were to edit all the grammer/spelling etc. Errors, I would over heat my computer with the spell checker. :)


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Crysa (41) writes:
I really enjoyed this, it is a little rough, but I love it. The content and the religious like idea...brilliant I say!



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