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Free

Wrapped in a poorly lit bathroom stall,
"tear another hole sexy, maybe two just to be sure."
The pounding of the music slows,
long enough to hear a heartbeat,
Is it mine or is it hers?
I don't think it matters.

Sitting side by side,
swilling away on bittersweet gibberish,
cliche burning on my chapped lips.
A warm kiss and a warmer suggestion,
"It tastes like poison but at least its free right?"

Ya, at least it's free...

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On Thursday March 31st, 2005, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

nothing is free there is always.....cost....*muah*

On Sunday March 27th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:

"least its all free".... i love it, short with few words, yet strong and with much meaning..~saint~

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, capt_funguy (992) writes:

pleasant little surprise ... tossed like a hip cinch ... dug it completely ... funguy

On Friday February 11th, 2005, Lotophagi (446) writes:

this reads like a scene from a movie in my mind.... like an arthouse flick that's deliberately underrated..... the last line is a killer. thank you.

On Friday February 11th, 2005, Dr Benway (51) writes:

That has to be one of the coolest compliments I have ever received. thanks, that made me smile

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, ardneK (100) writes:

wow.......that is deep...awesome write awesome, I'll be watching your work more - >|

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

shit your amazing...

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Zara Synn (75) writes:

That's it. You're going on my favorites. 'Nuff said.

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:

definitely creepy, but in a very good way. i like how you ended it...

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, thinevoicetragic (63) writes:

awesome write.

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Six-Out (1798) writes:

God, do I know this all too well...

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, sIo (845) writes:

creepy yet seductive. very nice.

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:

wow this one really kept my attention, and i loved the ending. great write. .........................-samone

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

words of pain and beauty...love it! ~AoD

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

and i'm glad to see you writing more...you know how much i love reading your writes..hehe..

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