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With heavy heart in hand,
I break.

Like waves upon the rocky shore,
I crash.

Now with a crimson smile,
I bleed.

A shouting voice proclaims to you,
I love.

You leave and like a mute,
I fail.

With shattered heart and broken mind,
I tried.

But in that moment you left,
I died.

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On Tuesday December 4th, 2007, thelostmessenger (176) writes:

the ending IS beautiful... just... beautiful. nice write. *messenger

On Sunday June 24th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (452) writes:

oh i loved the ending best. but it all was so lovely ;)

On Tuesday June 20th, 2006, Jaded Ireland (28) writes:

On Monday November 28th, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (109) writes:

I like this..short simple and tragic

On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (148) writes:

I loved the way one can read this in two ways, separatly...beautiful wrt.

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

speechless..fantastic..beautiful...wonderfull! All my scars-inside and out are alive to memories..fantastic write! -Kel

On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (51) writes:

Beautiful.. - Holly

On Friday January 21st, 2005, Dedkandanc (17) writes:

Wow...that just struck a knife through my heart. Every loss I have endured in life just rekindled fresh to memory. Nicely written.

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