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"Burning with you" by Trail of Fiends

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How we became fire?
And drove desire to its peak?

In your heart
At your pace
I was lost in your rhythm
So unstable
So passionate for me
I was scared
I had nothing to say
I couldn't feel the day
While your ghost kept bleeding in my arms

You walked away
I followed your trace
Your nest was a lake of glass
Where you were good at things you never did
And there was the presence of the public eyes

So here I am
Pleasantly inert
With spirals of fire
Excited to forge the everlasting two faces
One gets pain and depression
The other gets sick and depressed

Quit the shame
We're the same
We're the center of Earth
How our skins melt by the envy of outsiders
Dancing over puddles of blood
With only tissues connecting
And air cells perfusing

Flames inside us
Let go
And lovers will lay



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On Friday February 29th, 2008, MGood (78) writes:
oh wow! this is simply enchanting. i was most definitely filled with emotion by it! i am looking forward to reading more of your work. ~M.


On Sunday February 20th, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:
"So here I am / Pleasantly inert / With spirals of fire" - this is marvellous; it just subsumes me. Powerful and compelling and beautiful. Lovely write.


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, knightmirror (425) writes:
this flowed like a heavy song....great alliteration and mgnificent wordplay....you remind me of myself a little with your unique style and ability to describe these amazing pictures you paint your words...*standing ovation*....-knight


On Wednesday January 19th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:
wow...i can't put a finger on the right word[s] to describe the feeling i got from this. its magnificentlly wonderful. great lines here. *welcome to dp*


On Thursday January 20th, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) writes:
Very apreciated ;)



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