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"To paint a picture of the fall" by Tommyrot

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concerned about the twitching undertone
i in a one thought state of mind
pierced the cool canvas
disrupting every preceding
still captured autumn i’ve known
reaping as an abstract means to an end
glorifying dead leaves and destroying content
listen and you will feel torn
overcome by mother and exposed to the unforgiving sky
lay now and eat earth but don’t dismay
you’re naked you’re beautiful
and your death will bring anew

               - Tommyrot


Copyright 2005 Tommyrot

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On Friday February 11th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
..just..wow..


On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:
wow.. i agree with suicideseason!!!


On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:
You fucking rock.


On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:
i can see a piece of the puzzle within you, yet you still look for the key..it is your pain, and your ability to know it


On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, spaniellie (89) writes:
short but sweet. i love the way you discribe your pain. great write.


On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, Tommyrot (6) writes:
This is not about my pain. It is the rhythmic beauty I see in the changing season and it’s life and death. Mother is to earth.



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