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"When Lights Go Out..." by ardneK

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Lying on a bed of comfort
With two I am most fond of
One in darkness conspires
to feed her desires
but I would not fall prey to her cause
for she was the sweetest of them all
but speaking of her dark desire
set us both on fire
So in darkness did we confide
I fought against the flame
until I could no longer
and so I reached to tame her fire
she laughed
and in so, denied it
 



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On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:
Thought provoking,a very impressive write


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:
wow..


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:
this is the 2nd time i read this...and still fall short in comment of a mere shadow in light of this...you've scratched my heart with reality of a memory of mine...damn...


On Friday January 14th, 2005, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
interesting and enticing...well done


On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
I'm gona put you on my favorit list now.. thank me later ... *drinks some more, hoping to dodge the insults* I'm gone add that in a poem...


On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, stormtalk (881) writes:
This work has some very interested rhythm; I enjoyed the break at the end, in particular. Interesting write... are these two sides of you? Or two lovers? Dark and ethereal...


On Friday January 14th, 2005, ardneK (100) writes:
it is two lovers beside myself; me, the conspirator, and the all to willing victim, all in that order... - >|


On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
seems like if she wants you you dont want her, but when you want she she dont want you maybe, or maybe i missed the meaning, my comprehension problem, good write



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