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(thanks to Alec Pure for the title)

Grey skies surround
the lone figure kneeling
in the swirl of fog
that encircles a graveyard.

Heavy blankets of sorrow
surround the graveside where she sits.
Everlasting pain was promised
the day death reigned supreme.

Rain splattered tiny drops
upon the red head
bowed in silent anguish,
unsaid pleas going unanswered.

Tattered wings lay useless
in her loving hands
blue eyes closed in rememberance
of the soul which had once worn them.

Crimson tears slide down pink-tinged cheeks,
mixing with the blue raindrops
landing like dead rose petals on fresh soil
where the angel lay, so cold.

Silence deafened the noise
that had once been her laughter.
The lady's head slowly lifted,
for someone had touched her shoulder gently.

Blue eyes met hazel
and she knew.
He gestured to her
with an understanding in his eyes.

Feminine hands clasped masculine
and she silently gave way
to all her past memories
let go of her tattered, precious wings.

Gracefully she rose
and leaned into his arms,
enchanting the man
who refused to love for so long.

Perhaps to ease her pain,
he lowered his head and kissed her gently,
their tastes entwining,
souls combining.

Sweeping her into his arms
he carried the fallen angel
away from the gravestone which was her own,
and so very new.

As they left,
tattered wings turned new
and she knew everything
would be as it was mean to be.



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On Thursday March 1st, 2007, tangeled (551) writes:
deja vu. we seem to share the same imagination. i'm facsinated. your work is beautiful. i have goosebumps. ~tarnished angel~


On Saturday January 6th, 2007, anakronistik_me (41) writes:
i told you what i thought already, but i'm happy to say it again. 'twas beautifully written.


On Sunday November 26th, 2006, Ashlar (258) writes:
beautiful write...


On Wednesday July 26th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
like a tale outcast form Fanatsia...wow, I really like the flow and charm of this, very nice, a darkly romantic twist...hmmm, hats off!!


On Tuesday July 25th, 2006, The Fool (1045) writes:
This was a perfection that just shined the brightest I loved the ending it made my eyes cry ~nightly


On Monday July 24th, 2006, The Crimson Queen (1249) writes:
Simply perfection that creeps directly into my heart..this was beautiful Kel.


On Sunday July 23rd, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1089) writes:
damn...in my eyes, I saw the angel as a broken heart, being mended and completed by love and trust once again. Beautiful imagery, kel love...you're gorgeous. ~*Beth*~


On Sunday July 23rd, 2006, Fading_Smile (59) writes:
wow, you broke your writer's block alright, quite beautiful



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