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Undone

I will Be
Alright
Just let me
Let myself
Down
Slowly
Let me
Damn
My demons
Back to safe
Distances
Away
From my dreaming sheep
So vulnerable and tasty
Incessantly bleating me
Undoing me
I am
Aware
I am
Undone
At the moment
Be not deceived
For there is strength
In my weakness
And I am
A pretty
Nice
Guy.

Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
August 8, 2005; 22:07pm

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On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Eric (94) writes:

Very different but very good! Great write.

On Friday February 23rd, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:

"For there is strength In my weakness" this tasted familiar...your writes are amazing and this one is nothing less ~kristy

On Monday August 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

i love it.

On Monday August 8th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

No less than I'd expect from you, to fall and rise, to give so purely youself in these times that shake our foundations. A true poet you are. ~b

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