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My Love

I am a Hedonist
For your pleasurable fiction
And you my Devil
Are a sadistic Saint bent over
The damnation of my soul
Wriggling and writhing
About our double helixed fate
You, tortured by my Want
And I, nailed to your Pride
No matter how swollen your Arrogance becomes
It can never fill my Need
A necrotic umbilicus bloated and black
Clinging and repelling
Balancing us
As we plummet to Hell
Spiraling down
Unable to save one another
Un-wanting to Bail
Daring each other to pull
The ripping cord
Rooted to our hearts
On either End
The smell of your flesh
Burns my yellow eyes
Swinging through each other's sour wind
Endlessly forever and ever and ever and ever.

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On Monday September 12th, 2005, LiP Stiches (61) writes:

deep and blunt....damn that kicks ass!!

On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, abattoir (148) writes:

this was well written. expressive. your style is very different. I likeit.

On Friday July 15th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

you get me every time man! keep it coming. ~b

On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, sIo (891) writes:

whoa.....just....whoa

On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, Chimauron (126) writes:

Holy (or UN-holy) shit. This is beyond description for me. The visual that came to my mind's eye while reading this is something that Rembrandt would paint. Magnificent work, Gideon.

On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:

Wild write.

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:

nice wright can u overpass my works keep trying

On Monday January 31st, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

hey me again, you are amazing, beyond.. please become as much as you are

On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

hey this is really good man keep it up

On Tuesday January 18th, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:

~You, tortured by my Want And I, nailed to your Pride~ damn i love that line! this was twisted in a good way, welcome to DP ~kristy

On Tuesday January 18th, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:

ya...this is amazing. im *stunned*

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, suicideseason (2144) writes:

Totally wicked...Very nice.Welcome aboard.

On Monday January 10th, 2005, stormtalk (909) writes:

"A necrotic umbilicus bloated and black" is fucking awesome. The dark, hellish melodrama of this piece makes me warm and fuzzy inside. Great write. Off to read more...

On Saturday January 8th, 2005, DarkWolf (447) writes:

..wow.. Wickedly descriptive.. How your soul must dwell in such a state.. Excellent write.. -Michael

On Thursday January 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

Very dark and demonic, great write x

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

This was on your thing to get in here. It's why I said yes. Excellent write.

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:

impressive debut indeed! Love the opening two lines in particular. welcome to dp - fine write. :)

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