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Angela's Well

A falling star
Just falls
When
No one wishes.
Passively, silently
Screaming
Towards the bottom
Of the Well
To swim
With unfulfilled dreams
If only
There were a net
Woven so very tight
I wouldn’t
Slip
Thru
For I feel
So small
now
You
won’t
even
see
me
.

Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
April 24, 2008; 03:43am

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On Thursday April 24th, 2008, Mortis Moon (602) writes:

Id dive into tht well if only to make you happy. great write

On Thursday April 24th, 2008, NikesRain (1504) writes:

saddening to read and it rings like a hammer for for many i'm sure... good to see you posting again...

On Thursday April 24th, 2008, Sketso (511) writes:

Nicely done!

On Thursday April 24th, 2008, After hours (533) writes:

A free falling screaming moment...nice

On Thursday April 24th, 2008, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

sinks into your words that speak so loud. wonderfull write. ~ hdb.

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