Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


The tides of the day
Reave you from place

Grandeurs of time.

Somewhere the resolute
Intergenerate with the

Dancing dregs.

It wasn’t much else
Opiates in the mornings

Jamaican showers.

Why I turned about
I shall never understand

Perfect sight for perfect minds.

And beheld your face
Weathered and wrought

Like old leather.

When I wonder about
Times passed

I see you.

Death in the light of day
The diminution of sight

Plagued interstellar lights.

Where downs revive
And flesh is rent

Seven ways from remiss.

When the demure
Silence rings in your ears

Much as a passed star,

You will have seen my
Lead in the auspices of

Lightning remnants.

Coming to bear in
White clefts of

Salt flats.

I had sooner thought you
Dead than another

Conglomerate of

The chastity of the woe
For the sevenfold tense

Of a lightning day.

I postulate that
You may again soar

In space below.

Yours was the evidence
Of a life spent searching

For that last remnant of time:

The vertebrate condition.



Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
This explodes with passion, I enjoy your words, flow and the way it reached to me. Outstanding.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
sweetheart, you drive me to be a better man ;]


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Fornever_Never (264) writes:
The wording in this is remarkable ... I had to read it twice to fully understand everything you were trying to say .. :) ~T~


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1114) writes:
"Plagued interstellar lights" This is real (I could say much more, but I'll keep it 'to the point'). Perfect final line.


On Friday May 11th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
I'm speechless. This was truly amazing


On Sunday May 13th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
go to hell


On Friday May 11th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
"And flesh is rent"...and we can never own...I don't feel that your meaning is compromised by your word choice.you reflect the deterioration of body and time. Another wonderful write, my friend. ~Meg


On Friday May 11th, 2007, stormtalk (912) writes:
the last line is excellent, but your word choice too often overshadows your meaning


On Friday May 11th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
I think I see where you are coming from. However, I am not totally sure I don't wish for a departure from form. I am unsure what to do about it -- perhaps every poem needs a problem.


On Friday May 11th, 2007, stormtalk (912) writes:
the question is, are you writing for you or for everyone else? if the first, excellent... if the second, i think they'll get more out of it if they understand it (provided that you aren't just showcasing the verbal aesthetics)


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1114) writes:
Either Metallica, or metallica. Always for the self (unless for someone dedicated). I know I don't make sense half the time, but I always like the feel... when I try to write a Quality Structured poem, it useually doesn't feel like me, and thus it sucks.


On Saturday May 12th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
You could be dead right, or you could be full of shit. i have not yet decided. Perhaps you do not possess the intellectual accuity to understand this -- perhaps few to none do



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/8247/98382 on Wednesday July 09th, 2008 02:13 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)