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Solar Ecliptic

It was something drawn in the sand;
lines of disambiguation
drawn in shades of the sun.

Sometimes cutting like paper.
Crushed with a ballpeen hammer
it knows not the exuded blood
that spatters and pops.

Drawn in the garden of grains
the rays of the sun ignite
that last ounce of me which was won.

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On Monday April 9th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

Matty youre brilliant...baptized in the flames, this wept with power and feeling ~kristy

On Monday April 9th, 2007, Nuri (199) writes:

I get what elisa meant. Profundity in simplicity. Excellent.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, elisa (1988) writes:

a shadow carving a line in the sand.....you covered the whole gamut....of drawn......i love the words behind the words...if that makes any sense:)

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Starrburry Gayzur (73) writes:

Thank you for writing this. :) It was {more than} a good read.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, dying angel (1373) writes:

short..but deep cutting. this spoke volumes.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

This was beyond words. Well done :)

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Zhaal Nyet Telka (170) writes:

Lissa stole the words from my mouth. This was delicious in its short lust. ~Angel

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

Intense...insanely delicious spun beautifully.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

a deep examination of time and of the occupation of it, with such short but weighty stanzas and sounds spatters/pops...nice onomatopeia

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