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I endeavour to be humble
but consistently fail.

Yours was the light of the world
in me -- within me -- and
I knew something

of yours; something
which would titilate my
finger tips as they would
run over your

indiscretion.

Taken from root
with felling notion
of the grander days
in retrograde.

It slew from form
function
and something fecund
droops over
cliffs

into your pool
of broken acclaim.



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On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
brilliant as usual but those first two lines stole my heart, you had me at hello so to speak haha...


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
"It slew from form function and something fecund..." [fēcundus: love that fertile Lovecraftian sound: fecund!] (nice subtle touch of 'uh-lit-uh-ray-shuhn' within). Profoundly sub–umbrā; well expressed. We all endeavour that "light" yet...


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:
I love how you write..I need to read more. wonderful.


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Jay Jii (334) writes:
These words flowed like a glistening stream. Woderful work...


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, GreyDividing (194) writes:
Brilliant, utterly brilliant. ~FAV~


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Loketha Angel (157) writes:
This was gorgeous, just wow...


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:
wow. this was deep. ~ red.



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