DarkPoetry -|- Astra Dei -|- Sick. Forgive me.

Sick. Forgive me.

This sickness.
This indescribable “ Oh my god”
This need for you. For Us.

Vertigo and sweating chills.
Am I to be eternally tormented by your constant absence?

Forgive me for not being stronger.

Lick all the salt you want but this is just
Another shot of god knows what
When all I want is ambrosia

The promised nectar bringing us to immortality.
But what’s the goddamn point when you aren’t with me.

Another whispered "Forgive me".

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On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, An Expired Member (19) writes:

I know this feeling too well... Very emotional. Powerful, even.

On Wednesday June 21st, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:

short and sweet.

On Monday June 19th, 2006, Marek (145) writes:

I have read this like 20 times, over a few days, I think I have not commented because I am kinda scared... I feel like this is how I have treated people I have loved... powerful words.

On Tuesday June 13th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:

This said something to me..unexplainable.. like fuck it.. it doesn't matter anymore, but it should..ahh I can't descibe it but I like it..very good -Josh

On Monday June 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (10) writes:

Sickly sweet.A pleasure to read.:)

On Friday June 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

this is swept up in a maelstyrom of torrrent emotions that humans always collide with, and the end result is a kind of pathos that doesnt really answer anyhtiong but leads on...and on...intelligent write Nat, tremendously executed with depth and clarity.

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