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An image painted.
One word. One color.
Monochromatic explanations of complex emotions
That we could never describe.
(And it hurts.)

The promised forever is an eternity away.
While I am stuck. Held captive by the monotonous waiting.
Waiting. . .
. . . Irritating impatience with a dash of agonizing yearning.
(How bitter)

My ears ache.

Damn the sound of an unrelenting silence.
I yearn for the brush of your breath
As you whisper sweet Everythings
Against my temple.

My mouth quivers.
Needing the feel of your sweet tongue
Dragging a line of heat and tingling wonder
Across my open lips.

I am empty.

Hollow. Needing to be filled.
My heart, my mind, my shaking body
All of you, all of me.
I need You to make the “We”.

Forgive me.
This painting is not enough.
Because all I really have to say is an empty canvas.
Signed with a cliché “I love you’.














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On Monday April 28th, 2008, Nalle (77) writes:
I love this, I simply love this. And I agree with the sin.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Sin (1642) writes:
this was so soft and sad..like a whisper of resignation..its often the silence that breaks us..


On Wednesday June 21st, 2006, PaperPromises (77) writes:
This is remarkable beyond any words I could give you. You are one that will inspire many. -Cor


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Marek (145) writes:
I really enjoy reading your works. They are easy to follow, the message is conveyed well, but the messages and nuances in each work are worth pondering about. Thank you for sharing, really enjoying your work.


On Tuesday June 13th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:
Stop! you're killing me with your words like daggers through my heart..they rip me and I'm not even the one they are directed at..insane talent you have! -Josh


On Thursday June 8th, 2006, heartdripsblack (765) writes:
damn this was good


On Wednesday June 7th, 2006, Twilight (2102) writes:
i love you really is a cliche. death to the bastards that have worn it thin.


On Wednesday June 7th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:
first off...the title was awesome! i loved every last word..i couldnt get enough. this was just painted so beautifully and even with an empty canvas,you accomplish so much beauty.


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, Ainsof (1803) writes:
tongues on lips *woot*!! haha lovin this


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, Ainsof (1803) writes:
oh shit!!! DAMN.aldfal;kjsdnag valsdkahga laksd fuck yeah!! I lust this!!


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
holy shit...shivers abound..again..those sshort sentences..words have a stabbing effect on the mind, body soul....un-fuckin-believable..great comeback..can i have my Hat back now?


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, evolve (2231) writes:
This could have killed me.. if those three words hadn't already. Fuck. Excruciating. Mind. Body. Soul. Fuck. .. those three words. I know this.


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, evolve (2231) writes:
I know the silence.



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