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"My Eternal Alone" by Astra Dei

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Tomorrow rains through
Yesterday's sunshine
and today

Im still alone.

Im staring at these queer
surroundings
a place you call
my home.

I look out my window
into the darkening sky.
I sit and pray to God above.
I dry my soft damp eyes.

But I am still alone.

How strange this site that
greets my eye
through the opened window.

The red moon rises through
the dead white snow.

Yet, I am still alone.

The night owls hoot
and wolves howl their wistful,
sad love songs.

A soft cold breeze fills my lungs,
freezing my blood,
My heart feels withered and old.

Still I feel alone

I sit,
and hear,
and see,
and feel...

... Still sitting here.

I am all alone.



(An eternal alone)




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On Saturday February 12th, 2005, LadySouthern (24) writes:
Very good write..Its almost like some of the things I have on my page..I can definitely relate...:)


On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, purr_verse (1439) writes:
a cold, resigned hopelessness comes through in this piece; as Loto said, the repetition worked very well to emphasise the feelings here. Fine write, very effective. :)


On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Whisper (137) writes:
This write is magnificent, I absolutely adore this piece. ~Matt~


On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Lotophagi (457) writes:
ahh, your use of repetition to emphasise the meaning of the piece was lovely, it was an invitingly close poem, based around a single theme and contained to exploring the surrounds. Nice write. Thank you.


On Friday January 21st, 2005, JiNx (142) writes:
Wow that was beautiful.. amazing... *huggles close* and sad too.. don't feel like your totally alone, I'm always here if you need me! Love ya hunn -JiNx(ie)


On Friday January 21st, 2005, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:
good write...your not the only one that feels that way..-story


On Friday January 21st, 2005, AniDayz (1294) writes:
i'm not meaning to come across as critical, merely constructive. i do feel this work, it is well done...regardless of my biased opinion of the word 'queer'...


On Friday January 21st, 2005, AniDayz (1294) writes:
*made me cringe.


On Friday January 21st, 2005, AniDayz (1294) writes:
hhmm...well.this is quite well written with a deepness to it. i feel i need to add this note though*check the word 'queer'...maybe you could find a different word without such odius radiance. that word is so often used so out of context. it kind of made m



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