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NO MORE

No more
Cutting.
No more
Crying.
No more
Wishing
That I was
Dying.

No more
Anger.
No more
Pain.
No more
Hiding
Beneath my
Shame.

There's a devil
Inside my
Wishing well.
A tunnel
Leading strait to
Hell.

Time to deal
With what has been
Already given.
Time to find
What was once
Hidden.

I will walk
away from
You.
I will not
Hope
Or
Wish
Or cry.
Nothing left
But to do,

What I knew
All along
Must really be
True.

I am
Gone.
No more
Crying.
No more
Pain.

No more
Wishing,
To a well
In vain.

No more
Wishing, hoping, praying, begging
For a death
Never meant
To be.

A death
I wished for often,
But for YOU.
Not for me.

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On Friday June 16th, 2006, Marek (145) writes:

yay for rage! yeah, this was interesting. it was finished well. Set up and knocked down.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

this is brilliant. the first stanza blew me away and set this up so well. beautiful

On Thursday May 26th, 2005, braindeadpoet (127) writes:

In genereral a great write, but the flow was masterful. For some reason it spoke to me, but then again so do the voices haha. Going on my favs---thanx, jer

On Sunday April 10th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:

wow, that was greatly enjoyed....thanks for the read

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, DarkSoul (24) writes:

I love the rhyming scheme. This is deffinitly one of the best poems I've read on here. Welcome to my favorites list. ~DarkSoul

On Friday January 7th, 2005, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:

I love the ending. This also had an awesome flow.

On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:

dig the flow

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, stumbleine queen (5) writes:

ooh i looove poems with twists.. makes it so much more interesting and causes you to reread it several times to get the full effect. very nice

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, JiNx (142) writes:

I agree with everyone definetly and awesome ending... twists your whole thought of the poem around.. Great write -JiNx(ie)

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, K_Love (688) writes:

Nice ending I agree, the beginning really captivated me and the ending was a good one. Well written, nice job.

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:

HA HA!!!! Oh I really love this. the last stanza turns it all around for me...and I love the meter. Poetry with a short and fast pace are hard to write good...but you pulled it off.

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, Empathy (28) writes:

this was tightly structured and to the point.. You had my total attention.. Great twist at the end.

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