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Tommorow Never Happens

I'll smile for you
tommorrow
but today
i'll feel the
same.

Today i wear
long sleeves
to hide my ugly
shame.

Seems like
No matter what
promises i make
everday is still
the same

Becuase tommorow
never happens
tommorow it changes
and becomes a
today

So im locked inside
this constant time frame.
Where nothing will
ever change
i will always hide my
shame.

The pain,
inside me.
embrace,
long sleeves.

accept my pain
becuase it will always
be today

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On Monday January 15th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (109) writes:

I can really connect with this peice, the third and fourth stanzas were amazing, wonderful peice.

On Saturday May 20th, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:

this reminds me of a time when this would have fit me perfectly... very well written...

On Friday May 12th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"So im locked inside this constant time frame." I can feel this ... all of us have long sleeves we must at times wear, and tomorrow always becomes yesterday. Nice.

On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

would that tommorow would happen. I to have made those promises, know these feelings, though not to these extremes. very well expressed

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, LiP Stiches (61) writes:

I long to touch tomarrow... for today has sliped out of my hands... and is falling into yesterday...

On Thursday May 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

exactly what im always thinking, i can really relate.

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, stumbleine queen (5) writes:

wow... i really, really love this one. i can relate, the rhyme scheme is nice, and it's just simply awesome.

On Monday December 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

wow that was awesome it has great potentional

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, K_Love (691) writes:

*nods head* So true, I feel the same way. Awesome write, well done. Some great lines in this.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

nicely done

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, AniDayz (1281) writes:

...which becomes today...which was once yesterday...which was five years ago. this is very well done!

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, AniDayz (1281) writes:

very nicely done....you describe a feeling of which i believe to be universal...we try and make excuses for remaining locked inside our chains[shame]...we lose sight of the ability to step out of that realm;therefore,locking ourselves into yesterday...whi

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:

This is very awesome. "Today i wear long sleeves to hide my ugly shame." Very powerful line which I'm sure we can all relate to.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

i love this...its like the pain just goes on forever, and i can relate to that

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:

very cool, I liked it alot, good perspective~~b

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

oh god, i can relate to this more than you will ever know. i too hide under long sleeves waiting for a better tomorrow that never comes. your feelings here were full of raw, truthful emotion. damn fine read! ~sex~

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, Tangent Ponderings (15) writes:

wow! this could be the alcahol and cause i'm the first to comment, but this is fucking good because i can actually feel it

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