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a poem to my ex

You yell and scream as if I cared,
You called me an asshole and a bastard,
SO WHAT!
You say I lied to you,
You said I spread rumors about you,
WELL FUCK YOU!
You lied to me, you spread rumors about me.
I never said anything about you,
I never did anything to you,
You live in a fucking dream world.
You make up lies,
Saying you’re pregnant,
Saying your going to die,
Saying you never cheated on me,
ALL FUCKING LIES!
I’m through with your bullshit!
I sick of listening to you,
I tired of having to deal with your friends thinking I’m the bad one,
I am just fucking sick of you!
I dumped your ass twice!
And I’m glad!
Well I lied to you too,
I said I loved you,
HA!
How could I ever love such a dirty little lying whore?
I told you that poem was written for you,
Guess what!
I wrote that a year ago for another girl,
She I did love,
And I was censer about that poem,
My feelings were real,
BUT IT WASN’T ABOUT YOU!
HA!
You can keep telling your lies,
I DON’T CARE!
You can say that I am spreading rumors,
I DON’T CARE!
You can say you are pregnant,
SO WHAT, I HOPE YOU MISCARRIAGE!
You can say you are going to die,
SO WHAT! IF YOU DON’T DIES THEN I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU MYSELF!!
You can do whatever you want to do,
I DON’T CARE!
Just stay the fuck out of my life!

~this is a poem to my ex,
she is a lying bitch,
I hate her!
she really fucked up my head.
I want to make it clear that i don't hate girls,
I just hate her.~
ADNW

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On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:

lol this shit was funny and you made your message so loud and clear for the world to see so I guess she gets the picture very clear.Your emotions are felt through every word written....Beautifully done!

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Great Write!!!! I can understand and relate with the feelings I went threw alot of that kind of bullshit with my exs only visversa They were guys.

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:

well please hate on without disruption -kitty

On Friday March 25th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

this is very angry, but its good..the emotions are incredibly clear, and i think she'd get the message loud and clear.

On Monday March 14th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:

wow, a shame i hadnt seen this piece earlier...i like....good job, so much hate and so many emotions, awesome write....~saint~

On Sunday May 1st, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (79) writes:

i agree very much anger sounds so much like me but i try to tone it down a bit, i like it, good write!!

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:

and it doesnt matter if you did spelling mistakes well good work i really liked it

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:

well i specialy like that part that says'if U can say your to die SO WHAT!! IF YO U DONT DIE THEN I WILL FU8CKING KILL YOU MY SELF" good one

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:

it mean but i liked it if she was all that you said then she deserves it well i hope that none of my ex ever right about me like that but one things is clear i nerver did that to a guy and well i hope you other relationship dont go as bad a this one well

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Goodnight_Moon (10) writes:

nice

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (37) writes:

she deserves it all

On Saturday April 24th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

This is great, makes me want to get her adress and kill the bitch though....-fairy-

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

it;s a good poem i just don't like the miscarriage part no one deserves that ~slave

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

that mofo can die and burn in hell. damn her good.

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

Overall I must admit that I liked the poem, except for a few reasons. There are many spelling mistakes and it doesn't really fall into the poetry category. Where do you draw the line between poetry and angry rambling?

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

very impressive. your feelings and emotions are so real. i know how exes can be =| many people can probably relate to this which makes it even better. =)

On Monday February 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

wow...I love this. Its one of those poems you can just feel and imagine saying. Its raw and harsh and hits you right where it needs to. I bow to your work lol

On Monday February 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

hahahaha you're right she is a bitch and when you do kill her I know where you can hide the body...no one will miss her. This is one of my favs from you....I keep coming back to it

On Sunday January 18th, 2004, rage_angel (4) writes:

I know how you feel, buddy. Exes all suck and can all die if they lie and spread rumors. Good job expressing how you feel. I'm sorry you had to go through all that for someone as stupid as her. All the work you did and for nothing. It sux doesn't it?

On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

i wrote something similiar about my ex, well, not really, but it all boils down to the same thing.. i want to see him die, just like you want to see your ex die.. yay, we have something in common.. do i smell an evil plot brewing? ;-) j/k if u want you ca

On Monday November 17th, 2003, purr_verse (1423) writes:

Brutal, that's for sure. And so I feel like a real picky bitch to do a spell-correct on it, but I think you want 'sincere' not 'censer'... Sorry. Nice catharsis...

On Sunday December 7th, 2003, adreamnotwanted (40) writes:

ya.. i need alot of spelling correcting on this one..

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, Storm (184) writes:

Hate can be such a wonderful thing. This particular hate I praise (even if "me" being a girl). You go Boy!

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

heh thats brilliant. dont worry, we arent all like that MOST of us are loveable, but there are plenty of skanks.

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

nice poem i guess u dont care and u hate her and not all females are like that

On Friday September 5th, 2003, Nightmare (26) writes:

Yea- sounds like soo many girls that I would never get along with at my school. I hope she gets what's coming to her. Good write - Lee ^_^

On Monday August 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:

i love it. i have seen this scene so many times before. im sorry it happened to you. but if it didnt i wouldn't be reading this... and that would suck.

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I fucking love this poem!!

On Wednesday July 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

This a like, I can feel ur hatred, ur anger... My exbf fuct wif my mind too, but unfortunately I still love him and want him back...

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

lol can u say bad break-up? or is that too little to comment on this LoL *~*aNDReW*~*

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (121) writes:

damn talk about letting it all out... did you ever let her read this?

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:

damn....that is some harsh words!!!!

On Sunday June 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (31) writes:

Bravo! Poems about exs are aways the best..shes a bitch

On Tuesday March 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

good job KC....i hope Christine has read this poem. I wonder what she's thinking about this. It was great though. I loved it even tho I'm a girl.

On Thursday April 3rd, 2003, Nevaeh (27) writes:

i agree with everyone else...love the emotion you captured in this piece...awesome work

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

im going to have to disagree here.. yes it captured emotion, but talking does the same thing. where's the art form?? bashing people is ok if its just to let out emotion without violence, but to call it poetry? i admire your ability to be honest about your

On Friday April 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

wow interesting...blAH so you really hate this girl huh? heh ok then

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, adreamnotwanted (40) writes:

yes i do.. i really fucking wish she would die.. i wrote "dirty little lying whore".. which is also about this girl.. read it if you get a chance..ADNW

On Wednesday February 12th, 2003, MindRape (861) writes:

IMHO.... the emotion in this is raw, powerful and energeic. I LOVE that in a poem. Kudos for nailing your grief! But mostly what I like about this is the end. You are mature enough to seperate "her" from "us" Good Job poet! :)

On Wednesday February 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I really don't like this poem

On Friday February 28th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

wow! that is some amazingly constructive criticism. you're a fag! oooh! there's some intellect for you ontogenetic. it's ok to not like a poem, but if you're going to comment, why not say why, in a manner that doesn't make you seem like a dick?

On Sunday June 22nd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I so agree... You have to have reason why you hate something and if not then that isn't a good reason!

On Friday February 28th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

i'm sorry about calling you a fag, it was merely to illustrate the stupidity of just bashing people. one 'super intellectual' dig for another.

On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

lmao :D

On Wednesday February 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

i like your poem even though i'm a girl i know how ya feel.....

On Wednesday February 12th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

i had myself one of those... i guess it's almost a year ago... i still hurt. sucks ass. girls bleh

On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

first off, good peom, loved the raw emotion,.Though I am a girl I know how you feel, but it was more like him spreading all the rumors about me, not me about me. Why this chick would WANT to be pregnant is beyond me, nobody wnats that in HS..but fish, th

On Monday June 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Sounds like another ex I know

On Friday August 8th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (690) writes:

Wow I wish i could send this to an asshole who did the same to me, but I am afraid he'd start everything all over again, and I really don't want the headache. So I'll just congratulate you =) Velvet.

On Friday December 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

OMG...great piece! I can really feel your anger! I wish I too could send this to my ex but you know....

On Wednesday February 12th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

im a girl :-(...

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