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Kiss the breath back into my lungs...
and whisper into my deaf ears
[if you can taste the blood on my lips].



And tell me if the tears are too much...
and I'll -feed- them to the

thunder clouds.


And they'll devour them
like broken temple gods
that decayed...
.just a little too late.


Just for you baby.
Only for you.
 
For your hatred is my cigarrette...
 and I'll smoke it s/l/o/w/l/y'






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On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Err0r (579) writes:
Awe...I think you ripped my innards out and jumped all over them. You have that way with words. To envoke such an emotion out of me. Wonderful. Also, I love your new pic thats up! Beautiful. :)


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:
The words just seemed to rip inside of me.. leaving me breathless..


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
This just spoke out to me in a weird way and made my whole body burst to every word


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:
outstanding. this is my favorite of yours so far. the metaphors were priceless and that ending just floored me.


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
Amber - I think maybe the first time I read/commented on your work - the GLOMP lady as you will be fondly known as here, wow really like this punchy, terse flowing effort - I like this meataphorical hatred/cigarette ending - I can really suck it in.



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