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Ecstasy

serotonin
over-loadin
popped a magic pill

I feel outstanding
eyes expanding
nothing's standing still

I keep talking
Steven Hawking
ain't got shit on me

fear is broken
joy awoken
spirit flying free

everyone is beautiful
everything feels right

if this DJ doesn't stop
I'll dance all through the night

mouth is dry
I aquify
and head back to the floor

magic feet
lost a beat
I stop to pop some more

after-hours
morning sours
Happiness was lost

still awake
a big mistake
bliss holds quite a cost

not again
a lie is when
you say what you wont do

and of course
with much remorse
my party isn't through

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On Wednesday May 30th, 2007, AbjectColloquialist (40) writes:

In this world we live in, theres nothing wrong with rolling the nights away.

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (343) writes:

Drugs sadden and scare me. So do dance clubs. *hides under bed*

On Friday March 9th, 2007, openureyes (73) writes:

Bliss holds quite a cost. Aint that the truth. I also liked the upbeat X-like flow. U brought me back.

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Freebird (655) writes:

I can relate. You painted a perfect picture with this piece.

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:

I know the feeling... I think the rhyme scheme added much to the poem in that the upbeat flow contrasts with the remorse expressed at the end.

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:

I swear I am never drinking Draino again!................this weekend..............starting tomarrow:)

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Zen (629) writes:

whoah, thats great. and i like the rhyme scheme just fine. its not forced, its just there.

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

rolls effectively with an underlying message...fun and jaunty

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Guillotine (228) writes:

Dangerous shit. Even though it was a cliche rhyme scheme, I still liked this.

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