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"thirteen teeth" by swing_the_hammer

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he says
i love you.
both and i need to know
which one
most so off he goes
to decide
yes or no yes
or no
.
.
i said
i'll leave you.
though i can't love
you unless
you just
let me know
which one is best
no or yes no
or yes
.
.
my
old heart is
the one i was given
but damn
this thing
can't keep
any rhythm

there's so
much hurt
a blank address
which one more
which one less


 i will not
rest my heart
low in my chest
i can always
go just say
yes or no
yes or
no
.



if you love
me please
just tell me
dear or i'll pack up
 my stuff and
get out of
here
.









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On Monday April 23rd, 2007, capt_funguy (998) writes:
dug the playful appproach, it reads itself to you ... like pulling daisy petals - loves me/loves me not ... you'll only matter if you want to ... great stuff ... funguy


On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
i thought i had commented on this before, but i guess not. i really enjoyed reading this..i love the form and the sentiment. it definetly painted a picture for me..beautifully done.


On Monday April 16th, 2007, dying angel (1340) writes:
ugh. i tried commenting yesterday and i couldn't. i actually came back to this piece a few times and reread it. it shatters.


On Monday April 16th, 2007, Six-Out (1823) writes:
this.is brutal. fuck that. you're stronger.


On Monday April 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
you never cease to amaze me.


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:
simple, but still enigmatic... hmmm...


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:
yeah, now that i know what this is about, parts make much more sense... and the whole is all the more brilliant... well done, as usual.



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