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remorse code

he asks what i'm thinkin
'cause he hears me blinkin
so i tell him i'm thinkin

about quietly sinkin

in a bottomless lake
on an oragami ship
where silence means peace

and my eyelids don't click...

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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, Alanarchy (1691) writes:

This BEGS to be put to music.

On Thursday April 17th, 2008, BetterOffDeadMoon (562) writes:

oh so true! thatd be so kickass ^_^

On Thursday April 17th, 2008, RubyXero (454) writes:

short, sweet, and SUPER!! i liked it. :D

On Thursday April 17th, 2008, An Expired Member (30) writes:

simple but moving.

On Thursday April 17th, 2008, After hours (567) writes:

a cool little tiddley bit.

On Wednesday April 16th, 2008, Six-Out (1823) writes:

hit me again.

On Wednesday April 16th, 2008, BetterOffDeadMoon (562) writes:

i likes this. ^_^

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