DarkPoetry -|- swing_the_hammer -|- you say fall, i say how hard

you say fall, i say how hard

she goes by the name you gave her
i go buy a ticket home
go ahead hurt me. you can have her
i will walk these roads alone

it's a lie- you cannot save her
you can't even set down your phone
it's too much old news. i would rather
learn now than to not have known

i really hope you never forgave her
and all these lies get etched in stone
maybe someday you'll be braver
after you're cut down to the bone

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On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

ghaaaa!!!!! sigur ros... i know i put pieces to music, but for me that is the highest form of flattery.... i can hear this to a haunting melody of a violinist swaying over a guitar... luminous.

On Saturday August 11th, 2007, sIo (883) writes:

the rhyme scheme rocked and the point fell hard, and smooth. perfect poetry.

On Saturday August 11th, 2007, braindead_poet (581) writes:

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On Friday August 10th, 2007, Six-Out (1827) writes:

short and sweet. sinister, and all of that. good job.

On Friday August 10th, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:

v good

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