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Things got out of control
And I can't fix it
And I can't let go.

What do you do when you're so confused
There's no where to turn
And everything you might lose.

When you're dazed
And your thoughts are muddled,
When the look in your eyes is glassy glazed

'Cause the deeper you get
The more you can't get out.
And the motion is set

For an automatic fall.
You feel so small
When you used to stand so tall.

Things got out of control
And I can't fix it
And I can't let go.





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On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Six-Out (1827) writes:
Eh, bland rhyme, and so jumbled that I couldn't tell what you were trying to say at all. Work on structure, and maybe this will be decent.


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:
The truth in ourselves is not always that easy to see...and I do believe you have stated this beautifully. ~b


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:
very good poem


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
normally I'm not a huge fan of the standard A-B-A rhyme scheme but it works wonderfully here- the attempt to rationalize the chaos of nonrational emotion. Good write


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
this is one of my faves out of your works. oozing with sadness. -zay


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
Beautiful. I feel your pain



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