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"Broken Dreams" by Black_Cherry_Doll_

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Broken dreams,
Lay shattered all around me.
Illusions fill the empty space,
Your face is lost behind the dark smoke.
I'm lost!
Can't seem to find my way out.
I keep stumbling
Over the sharp edges of broken dreams.
They slice through my heart
And poke through my skin.
How do I find my way out
Of this room that never ends?!
There's nothing left at all
It's all gone now.
Illisions fade away
As reality sets in.
There's nothing left to hide
Except for pieces of broken dreams
Scattered all around me.





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On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, blue (1702) writes:
:) ..this was good work Steph, Loved the ending! ~b


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, peril_notion (122) writes:
excellent... great job ~Heather


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, dropsofhate (55) writes:
"Over the sharp edges of broken dreams." so wonderfully done. ♥


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, blue (1702) writes:
Wow Steph, that hurt...well spoken sorrow..."How do I find my way out of this room that never ends?!" I love that line...~b


On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
wow I like that a lot!! good work


On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
painful and sorrowed...


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
great job! -.cami


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:
wonderful work


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, ShadowFlight (138) writes:
dispair and desparity can work well together... I like the picture of broken glass you conjure here


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
numbingly melancholic, and despairing...thumbs up. -zay


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, island warrior (300) writes:
Exceptional.



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