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Take Two

Emotional seizure
Time now to leave ya
For where I don't know
Maybe somewhere thats easier
Just know I've gotta go
Sorry I couldn't please ya

Maybe it's me
Or the me I don't see
The silent partner
Leaning on the tree
Always offering advice
Nothings for free

Time to take two
Check out the view
Pay the bill later
Send it to who
Who-ever can handle it
However they do

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On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:

smooth and sleek and packed with meaning...ive missed you, welcome back ~kristy

On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:

Awesome write :)

On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

Very cool word play here. Rhyming "ya" with "easier" in the first stanza made me read the rest of the poem with what I imagined was my best New England accent. ~Ship!

On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, elisa (1987) writes:

a sexy tight write.....rolls off the tongue real nice~elisa

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