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Sunset

Time slides by
As we sit and wonder why
Those we love most
Take off and fly
Toward the beautiful sunset
At the end of the sky

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On Monday April 10th, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:

IF THE SUN COULD BE LICKED - I AM QUITE CERTAIN IT WOULD TASTE LIKE THIS. SUCH LOVELINESS..

On Monday November 21st, 2005, Michelle Xiao (508) writes:

Like a painting, and you squint to look past the sunset and onto the horizon, feeling of desolation under so much beauty.

On Friday May 20th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

I really like the way you worded this, reminds me of a quote from a song "It's never easy to understand why memories hold our hands but people let go." Awsome write. ~Ship!

On Sunday May 1st, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:

dammm...you etch out such an intense wonderment...inquisitive-ness...real/emotion..in such a beautiful way. e v e r y time. this is under my skin.

On Saturday April 30th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:

Oh wow, this just grabbed me in a way...the way poems should... *applause*ovation* ...where do I send the check?? :P ~b

On Saturday April 30th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

you write with such a gentle passion..and you express things so elegantly...even your pain is beautiful..nice write ~kristy

On Saturday April 30th, 2005, GirlintheBox (50) writes:

i like the way this flows off my tongue. its pretty :) ~krystal

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