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Little boy lost
In the concrete jungle
Overawed by the magnitude
Of the pressure he's under
Does he know where to go?
Or will he just wander?

Eyes wide open
In a body so frail
Drained of all energy
Delirious and pale

Tears trickle down
An expressionless face
Fast lane got too quick
Couldn't hack the pace

Put out your hand
Help pull him out
Of this pit of quicksand
This well of self doubt

Can you hear his call?
The pathetic yelp
Why dont you answer?
He needs your help

The chain slipped
He lost his grip
It wasn't the way he wrote the script
It just happened

Now he sits in a room
Surrounded by madness
Looking for ways
To solve the sadness.



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On Friday July 22nd, 2005, capt_funguy (999) writes:
quicksimple structure for painfully poigniant verses .. the pressure immense .. well expressed ... cool man ... funguy


On Sunday February 20th, 2005, Lotophagi (451) writes:
great write, this has got a really fast pace that seems to slide almost out of control - very emotive and expressive for lines that are so simple and short.... just awesome. Thank you.


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:
Oh my... sadness and beauty in one... WOW, I love it. *Raven*


On Monday February 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:
this reminds me of a kid i know... his mom has cancer and he cant understand it. it made me sad to read this. good job.


On Saturday February 12th, 2005, K_Love (693) writes:
This was deep and filled with heartclenching emotions. Incredible job.


On Friday February 11th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:
...like being locked in a hellhole of saddness with your vocal chords ripped out and motion cracked and stolen from your joints...


On Friday February 11th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:
*swallowing*....but the lump in my throat has manifested itself into an infinite mass ....a heartwrenching...gut pulling...'nerve striking'[indeed] piece.


On Friday February 11th, 2005, elisa (2036) writes:
this is like a dark surreal dream.......nerve striking......,modal~elisa



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