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Stop The Clock

I need some help
I'm here everyday
Unable to resist
The temptation to stay

I feel so much pain
Life's not the same
Forever wishing
For a positive change

Let me turn back the clock
Then put on a lock
So time never reaches
The point life is lost

Haunted by blame
Partnered with shame
Cutting in on the moment
Then dancing away

To lose myself
How hard could that be
I'll be anybody else
Just don't make me be me

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On Monday February 7th, 2005, Future of Despond (94) writes:

Well done, nice ending.

On Friday February 4th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:

ohh...this is so wonderfully done. the flow is captivating in and of itself, and the meaning of the write strikes me so hard.its like looking into the mirror of my mind;reading this. i love it.

On Friday February 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (451) writes:

ahhh, awesome rhythm, ironically reminds the rhythm reminds of the impossibility of stopping the flow of time..... your message is potent..... great work. Thank you.

On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, blue (1754) writes:

Ahh! Wonderful flowing piece...great message, well spoken...you did a marvelous job with the rhyming here! ~b

On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, DeprivedOfReason (42) writes:

tick,tock,tick,tock ...me like, me love, time still ticks .. so you must continue to write,& i shall continue to like

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

sad and powerful....

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, happilydepressed (216) writes:

great write

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Psyko (41) writes:

very powerful write ~Nick~

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, elisa (2036) writes:

I believe there is a god that holds the pendulum of time......interesting request in the last line.......?~elisa

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