DarkPoetry -|- island warrior -|- Millimetre No. 9

Millimetre No. 9

You went out of your way
To hurt me today
You shouldn't have done it
Now it's my turn to play

The gates are open
Let the games begin
Evil has awoken
No one can win

You may pray for mercy
There's none in me
Buttons were pushed
Strikes number three

I tried to warn you
You wouldn't listen then
It's too late now
It's not if but when

So when you're walkin' down the street
Remember to look behind
Cutting throught the darkness
Millimetre No. 9

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On Monday January 1st, 2007, Collective Amnesia (234) writes:

very intense and pulsing...the rhythm is great. good job ~Tamara

On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:

Loved it - great twist on the Love Potion song! : ) Ciao, T/S

On Saturday March 5th, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11) writes:

So vicious, I love vicious.....

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Lotophagi (446) writes:

biting.... this moves so quickly..... great imagery, and I love the concept. Rocking piece. Thank you.

On Monday February 7th, 2005, VenomPlease (176) writes:

I like this. There's kind of a sickness about the whole thing. Very cool.

On Monday January 31st, 2005, ardneK (100) writes:

I'd have to agree with Ani, though it is simplistic form, it captures your emotion perfectly and is intense - >|

On Monday January 31st, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

*catches breath* this is intense. the first stanza is an exceptional introduction to this. the flow is so rhythmic, its all echoeing in my brain. very well written and expressed.

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