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Watch The Windows

Freight train of fury
Running in a straight line
Fueled by the torment
Of the words you unwind

Why must you toy
With what is unknown
The power of aggression
Differing from your own

Frightening thoughts
Splashing my mind
Taking over commonsense
Reality left behind

Speech is impaired
Vision unclear
Full of adrenalin
Void of all fear

Like looking through the windows
Of a house that is burning
Feel the intensity
Flames twisting and turning

So take heed my friend
Of the message that's given
Beware of the danger
And the way that it's hidden

Judge not by the cover
The friendly disguise
Look through the windows
It's all in the eyes

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On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

thats last stanza was like a punch in the face for me...i hol those lines close to my heart..exelent work

On Thursday December 30th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:

A strong message and true! excellent write....biting! ~b

On Friday December 24th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

oh my god... december eighth was the day that my house burnt down.. the day this was posted... as i started to read i could see it all clearly and the image was there.. and then you say those words.. and this whole thing.. whoa.. its fuccing amazing.. god

On Friday December 24th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

this has to be a favourite now.. youve left me with this creepy sinister tingly vibe.. i love it.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

PS- killer last lines.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

Holy shit, i love this write...i crave this kind of writing...i'm off to read some more...awesome.

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:

This is pretty intense. I like it... great work

On Monday December 20th, 2004, AniDayz (1281) writes:

oooohh..im gathering somethin' from this, not sure if im on track with it... 'judge not by the cover...look through the windows...it's all in the eyes..." this great and id love to know more...

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

Great write all the way through. The ending was the best. Very cool write.

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:

started and finished strongly. and i especially liked the conclusion, truth to be told in these words. good work.

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

nice write written very well

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, happilydepressed (216) writes:

nice write,cool beans

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